Between the Tic of Every Second

So I've written the end of this song so far, still working on the rest, trying to come up with an idea of how to lead in to it. It's coming out more angry than I expected, which is fun.
I'm embarrassed at the quality of it at the moment, and the flow doesn't make sense. Hopefully it will once all is done.


But between every breath, and
Between the tic of every second,
When I look in your eyes
I see the fire returned in mine,
when I look in your eyes I see
Everything that should be,
When I look in your eyes I see.

So When I look at you I laugh,
Because I don't know if the lies
Come from your eyes
Or from your mouth...

So there lay the riddle,
Of your heart I can't unlock,
When you say goodbye do you
Want me to chase you,
When you say hello do you
Expect me to walk?